Yo creo que el efecto foco sobraba, le da cierto aire como de foto de libro de religión XD Naaah, no me hagáis caso, es imposible cargarse esta imagen.
Eso sí, donde esté la original...
All I really saw was Edward’s face; it filled my vision and overwhelmed my mind. His eyes were a buttery, burning gold; his perfect face was almost severe with the depth of his emotion. And then, as he met my awed gaze, he broke into a breathtaking smile of exultation.
Bella Swan. Breaking Dawn, p.48